Black Poetry : Thinking About Killing (I need prayer)

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  1. monad.poetress

    monad.poetress Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thinking about killing (I need prayer)
    By Monad.poetress


    I don't know how to get out of this mess
    All you do is bring me stress
    Now that we're apart you still try to run my life
    Thats why I stand over you sleeping with my knife
    I put you out and you beat your way back in
    You made me desert each and every friend
    I know I need prayer
    I'm in such despair
    But with the lights off and my tears....I really don't care
    I want to stab you
    Take your life
    But I just can't do it with a knife
    I tried before to poison your drink
    But you poured it out in the kitchen sink
    So you sleep right now
    And I stand over you
    To kill you or To not kill you what do I do
    I can't take no mo' beatings....
    I wish I was dead
    All kind of images go through my head
    How can you force yourself into my home
    All the love I had for you has vanished....its gone
    I can see you dead......really I can
    I can see you a goner.....one dead man
    I need prayer cause I'm tempted
    To kill you in your sleep
    The hate I have for you is just too deep
    So Destee Forum pray for me
    Cause I'm bout' to take his life
    But I just can't do it with a knife

    By Monad.poetress
     
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    Sometimes we die by our own hands. It appears that he is slowly killing his own soul. If that is his choice, let him continue. But don't let yourself go down with him. You have the rest of your life to live for.
     
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    You can rise above this...
    let the poetry speak for you
    and the moment of crisis...
    but do not allow your hands
    to be influenced or forever
    stained by the evil deeds of another...
    You will rise...and you will rise
    above...
    this

    Vengeance is the lords... :grouphug:

    You have other options...Life
    and that more abundantly...

    My prayers are still ascending... :grouphug:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    prayer is being heard and sent upon thee
    open heart and recieve know the life of light
    is greater then hate and darkness
    keep ya faith and release da stress in flow
     
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    release it in flow
    it gets you at times the hate
    but thats the devil callin u to his side
    just do one day at a time
    for all prayers get answers
    for i will keep u in my prayers
    peace
    Angel
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    just read this flow monad...sorry I didn't get to you earlier..
    I am sure the prayers have gone up for you...and I know another one
    like mine
    will be good to...and so I send it up and down and all around
    cause it ain't about killing you
    cause killing him will be killing you
    and You
    to creative to go....
     
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    I'm kind of late reading this emotional piece. I hope those prayers worked. I'll keep praying anyway, sis.
     
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    Sister monad.poetress ... where are you? ... i noticed you wrote this peace a few months ago ... Gurl, don't kill him, if you aint did it already ... whew! ... bless your sweet heart ... aint no sense in you ruining the rest of your life ... where you 'et Sister? ... c'mon home and talk to us ... flow for us some more ... let us know that you dun moved past this point in life ... praying as i type Sister ...

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  9. DA BROTHER LOVE

    DA BROTHER LOVE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was such a deep piece... my heart goes out to the person that wrote this... so many times battered women are misunderstood when they kill their husband... but this piece puts everything in perspective and gives you a taste of what the pain is like... i sent up a prayer also for you and i hope that you will find a solution to get yourself out of this mess...
     
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    just read this piece too, and praying for you sistren! like the other's said, he ain't worth it. Keep writing and flowing girl.....u Blessed. 'memba dat! Jah Love and Guide :grouphug:
     
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