Black Poetry : Thinking -a Cinquain Chain

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  1. Jazz4u

    Jazz4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thinking
    Abandonment
    Has us assuming that
    All you have to do is save us
    From us

    From us
    Comes self hatred
    To much pride living lies
    We think all we need is to
    Survive

    Survive
    We’ve tried to do
    Some of us succeeded
    Without you truthfully blind to
    Our pain

    Our pain
    Flows into our
    Guilt in believing doubts
    That you’re not listening when we start
    Thinking
     
  2. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful and deep. Much respect for this piece.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this alot
    it is deep
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u pose a masterpiece here love it
     
  5. Jazz4u

    Jazz4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thankyou :heart:
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    MzBlkAngel
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