Black Poetry : Thinkin Of U

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  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thinkin of u my heart swells
    got me caught and tangled
    in love so deep
    got me in a spell
    wonderin
    how in the hell you
    can make me feel so....
    good inside
    u take me places i never
    dreamed of going before
    got me like



    :jawdrop:
    dayum!!!!
    how u make me fell like this?!?

    thinkin of u:love:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    my verse of
    thinking of u ..........................................................!

    Thinking of u all the time
    love tender and so fine
    thinking of ya tender kiss
    and the true love
    i don't wanna miss
    Thinking of u day & night
    praying to GOD ur be alright
    inside my heart u be
    it true love of thee
    thinking of u is all i do
    hoping our love is true
    feeling the vibe of ya scribe
    in the mental where i reside
    thinking of u !!!

    nice flow indeed
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwww

    awww that was so sweet you got me glowin over here rich
    thank u
    love is indead beautiful
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    aweeeeeeeeeee! u have feelin all sweet too
    can't help but love ya work of art , it pose a
    gentle warmth i so hold close ....so happy u here..
    most welcome
     
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    Clio_the_Muze Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Inspiration....

    A beautiful poem if I ever did read one, girlie? What was your inspiration for this peace ;)
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmmmmmmm

    nothin much just thinkin of someone is all;) ;) ;)
     
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