Black Poetry : thinkin of maurice

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by bahati, Jul 9, 2003.

  1. bahati

    bahati Active Member MEMBER

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    wasn't sure bout posting this one - i hope it's not too...uhm too much (?)

    unknown - u caught me
    strangely enuff - intrigued
    by ur smile - devilishly
    angelically slick
    got me in its claws
    lying beside u
    failed 2 resist the
    TEMPTATION
    delighful
    unimaginable attraction
    i felt
    simply had 2 surrender -
    GIVE MYSELF IN
    2 have ur lips on mine
    ur tongue caress mine
    addictive seductive
    PASSIONATE
    memory will force me
    back for MORE
    sends my mind on a journey
    2 daydreamland
    dreams...oooohhhh
    ur lips allover -
    CONVINCING -
    i give up, defeated, ENJOY...;)
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Temptation presented...Giving in...to the Passion...Got me going back for More...I give up in defeat...Might as well Enjoy!

    Nice flow Bahati...Temptation and Passion commingled a powerful combination for anyone to resist.
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is wonderful bahati..loving this much..nice flow..passionate thoughts
    Peace
     
  4. bahati

    bahati Active Member MEMBER

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    thanks you two - wonderfully interpreted
     
  5. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In the words of Luther,

    "Never too much, never too much, never too much!"

    Good flow bahati....i'm feelin ya style! :kiss:

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  6. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is very nice bahati,
    applaud ur flow
     
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