Black Poetry : Thinkin' Deeper

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by N2urSoul, Feb 14, 2002.

  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Stanzas sleep
    wherever I do
    Scribes crawl
    into bed and
    wrap themselves
    around my arms
    my legs
    covering my entire body
    loving me
    completely ~
    The words of my poems
    are more consistent
    than that
    of any man
    I've ever slept
    with



    (c) FINDING SO(u)LUTIONS
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thinking within consistent of what it look like without
    and inside da poetic scribe u need not of he coz da
    feelin is true..............N2 write dem lines as u vibe
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmm...true intimacy with the pen will create the birthing of a new style of poetry....

    beautiful poet...

    one
     
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    N2ursoul

    Deep Scribe Sis! Also a beautiful name.
     
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    N2ur,

    Beautiful description of the intimate power of words. Thank you.

    BE
     
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    Giovanni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ouch!!!!!

    "The words of my poems
    are more consistent
    than that
    of any man
    I've ever slept
    with "

    wow!! no comment..
     
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    N2...

    You are such a gifted poet..
    really enjoyin that thing you do
    with words....thanx 4 sharing.


    Epiphany :heart:
     
  8. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank u for the read $$RICH$$

    Always :heart:

    N2 :)
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dnommo

    Yep, you're right......true intimacy with the pen will ultimately take one well beyond the surface of a sheet of paper... :)

    Thanx for the read!!

    N2

    :heart:
     
  10. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    blackfox ~

    Thank u for the read here sis!

    N2
     
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