Khasm13 : think twice

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  1. Khasm13

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    maybe we outta think twice
    cause ya love is like fire and ice
    you got me locked in this vice
    that sometimes doesn't feel very nice
    what is this talk of white dresses and rice
    maybe we should take our families advice
    and think twice

    today ya love me
    tomorrow you'll hate me
    wanna debate me
    about what i should be doing
    when all i been doing
    is steadily persue'n
    you
    thru da sun and da rain
    why do i feel my efforts are in vain
    cause over da simplest thing
    you're so ready to ring
    my throat
    what about all the poems i wrote
    for you
    why is it soe easy for you to treat me
    like you do
    hot and cold
    meek and bold
    young and old
    you keep flip'n it
    and i'm bout to say
    **** it
    cause it's not worth it
    all da pain and agony
    is drain'n my battery
    this is a full time job
    i need a higher salary
    for putting up with me
    and you
    im not say'n i'm thru
    but.....

    maybe we outta think twice
    cause ya love is like fire and ice
    you got me locked in this vice
    that sometimes doesn't feel very nice
    what is this talk of white dresses and rice
    maybe we should take our families advice
    and think twice
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was cool
    like the vibe alot...
     
  3. Quinessential1

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    K13-

    I tell you from experience marriage can be the most extraordinary thing to the most desolate place on earth.

    But as Luther says...there's NOTHING better than love.

    Do it if the love is strong.....keep thinking and before you know it, somebody is jumping the broom with your true love and you're just swept aside.

    One luv.
    Peace

    Q1
     
  4. true love

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    khasm...i really didn't know you could take it here...i was truly feeling this. you know when two people get together nine times out of ten they are going to have different personalities. different personalities clash...that's just the way love and life is...i think deep down though, you know this lady loves your no matter how badly she wants to 'ring your throat' . LOL. And for sure you love her...i'm with quinessential...'keep thinking and before you know it...'
     
  5. SwtT

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    q thats sum good advice:) Khas this was mad tyte as always my brotha:):):D
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Think Thrice! Nice write too.
     
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    *sigh* :) wow...so...school must still be in session cause khasm is up in here educatin' folks :)
    :bowdown: LoL :)
     
  8. Khasm13

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    thanks mzblk...i dig your vibe too

    thanks olakuoto...keep flip'n da script

    q1...this is fictional but still, your advice is tru
    as hell...thanks for take'n da time to drop a dime on me...word

    true...you are so right...clash of da chemistry...lol...thanks gurl

    swtt...thanks sweety

    1poet...man you said more den a lil bit...lol...thanks cuz

    triniti...i ain't school'n or rule'n...i just keep it move'n...thanks my poetic queen

    peace
    khasm
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very Nice...Khasm

    Well you knew a women could be fire and ice. So while you do deserve double pay. You are reaping the benefit of love.
    Keeping flowin
     
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    This is super! cat! Real nice....I like it a whole lot.
     
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