Black Poetry : Think (4 my brothers)

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  1. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So U think she looks like a model,
    face beautiful, body succulent...
    But she strives off of drama &
    curses anything masculine.
    U don't know, though cuz all U want is temporary release.
    Attracted 2 the visual her, not caring what's beneath the visage.
    Her demeanor's a facade 2 make U run blindly
    2 that physically promising mirage.
    She starts with a massage 2 relaxe the muscles
    and make the blood rush from 1 head 2 the other...
    Smothers U with kisses as U become momentary lovers.
    In the rush U forget that mini-me should be covered,
    But the deed is done & over...
    Then U begin 2 wonder...
    Is that 1 night of passion gonna cause a lifetime of suffer?
    If she got pregnant, would she be the right kind of mother?
    Then U shudder & remember this is another day...
    What if she gave me A.I.D.S.?
    Think...
    Please.
     
  2. MrAdams

    MrAdams Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re: hi

    good-evening PositiveMindset


    nice to see you posting on a regular basis...


    READ BELOW:



    all men need to read over this WAKE-UP piece... i mean to many are into sexing anyone as long as the woman will give it up... no more committed relationships as it's all about BED hopping and seeing how many women one can SEX... i wish more would take the celibate route and wait until marriage before having sex... an eye-opener indeed as i will print this piece out and let my buddies read over it...


    keep writing young lady, and i shall continue to peep your work...


    have a nice night...


    sincerely,
    c.t.adams-///
     
  3. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank U 4 the read & overstanding, but brother, I'm a dude.

    I feel U on the whole celibate thing, cuz it's just 2 hot out there now & I don't wanna die cuz I like pie.

    So I'm chillin' til I know the person very well, I've had 2 many moments of remembering where I was like [email protected], why did I do that.

    No more though.
     
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    this is the message that young men must hear today.
    getting "caught up" is a lifetime, not a one night stand.

    preach dat
    jh.
     
  5. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your message is right on time for real! More men need to read this. You would be surprised at how many don't use anything and really don't want to....some just because they think they know the person. It's really sad.
     
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    message made clear..think peolpe think
    Nice one
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
  7. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    jh, glad U felt it brother, getting caught up can get U laid down.

    true love, I used 2 be 1 of those cats that believed that mess. Then I heard the story about a lady sexin' dudes just 2 give it 2 'em, whoooaaa.

    Blue, thanks 4 the feel.
     
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    Let's give this one another round...
    It still suprises me how many
    still throw all caution to the wind...
    Let this piece ring....

    Continue to teach...Brother!
    we need this!
     
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    rahstagal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    was it "blood rushing from 1 head 2 the other"...lol (ehh hemmm) yes this is an important message to pass to all the brothas...
    nicely put

    praise
     
  10. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sister angelic, that's exactly what I'm sayin'.
    This isn't the days of free love &
    just gettin' shots if U get struck.
    Now U gotta screen the people U wanna get dirty with.
    Let's think.

    rahstagal,and closing your eyes & seeing with that smaller one, & it's near sighted.
    I thank U 4 the overstanding.
     
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