Black Poetry : things unspoken

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  1. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see within you things unspoken
    stories too precious to share
    I see a world of serenity
    full of hopes, lives and cares

    there is a chest with a golden lock
    no place for combination or key
    there are golden plates on top
    etched in the center, the word ‘Destiny’

    I see you sitting not too far away
    waiting for the day to appear
    that what’s inside will be released
    and beckons you to come near

    I see many suitors waiting in the wings
    for a time when they would try
    to climb the pedestal upon which you sit
    that is constantly on the rise

    the men come with different gifts
    things of glitter; foods so sweet
    but these are mere coverings for
    jealousy, hatred and deceit

    these suitors have fallen away from truth
    seeking to claim you for their desires
    not realizing that the eyes in which they
    see are consumed by lustful fires

    but through all the battles around
    me there i sit timid and shy
    and while they battle to climb the
    walls, on wings of eagles, I shall fly....
     
  2. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you my dear.. have allot of special gifts....
    some i believe you are completely unaware of......

    missing you immensely....

    ~teary eyed at 10:00am~
     
  3. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is why you are here...to help me see what i'm missin' :D:

    waitin for ya
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    D....

    brilliantly beautiful... As Usual!!... :)

    Always&4EvaPeace...
    Sunshyne~
     
  5. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    could you turn down them rays please

    i dark enough as it is ...i don't need such a tan :D: thanks for the read GA... it is a pleasure to see your name pop up on my scribes...
     
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    Reading you always
    And loving the experience
    You bring to my senses

    *sense-ability*
     
  7. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hunter...

    as always it is a pleasure to embrace your words. i am thankful today
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight flow..you always take me on a poetic ride
    likes
    angel
     
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    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    Great find Sista Angel!

    dnommo I got my eye on you!
    This is an awesome write Brother!
    A poetic ride indeed!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte sweet release bruh ya on hit from da meadows
     
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