Black Poetry : Things Have Changed

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by IfUComeSoftly, Jul 10, 2006.

  1. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Miscreant of my affection
    The complexity of our involution
    May be frivolous to you
    However to me it’s in
    Only describable as a marvel of love
    We should be capacitating
    The intricacies of our connection
    We should stand here immovable
    Instead of being trapped between
    The expectations of the present
    And the transgression of the past
    We should posture ourselves on
    Wonderment Mountain instead
    Of Bluff of the Faint-hearted
    Do your words hold weight?
    Or merely verbosity in its finest
    Unrecognizable to the spirit I once knew
    Why have you become the
    Miscreant of my affection???
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhhhhh! i love the changed hand this was awesome ya pen on fire
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LQQk at cha....

    I am feeln' this girl.

    We should be capacitating
    The intricacies of our connection


    OK....

    Nice scribe softly

    Much to you
     
  4. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    rich... and fast behind 4ever...lol

    aww... thank you so much for the love... i've been gone so long it feels funny to be back... lol...

    softly
     
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    fantastic scribe

    i had to run to the dictionary for the first word and i was happy i did. You took me down the journey and i enjoyed the ride.

    Peace

    Patrice
     
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    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PCQ???

    Honey I haven't seen you in a grip! I hope all is well your way.... thanks for the love...

    softly
     
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    what has changed my number aint and ya better call. for i have to straighten you out young lady. nice write sis dont let this neglect happen no darn me. Call me!!!!!!!!!!!!:welldone:
     
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