Black Poetry : Things Change

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  1. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Things can change on you in an instant how will you react will you
    go with the flow or stick with your instincts?
    ...Early Saturday night
    Carib sounds inspire hip movements
    Guiness & dro intoxicate souls
    Phermones stimulate libido
    Observations of
    passion lethargic woman stumbling from room
    hair twisted and disheveled
    Adorned in silky cream blouse, burgundy mini skirt.
    Both seemingly dry hump wrinkled,
    with Satisfied facial glow
    Peeked by curriousity
    I venture inside
    to see dancehall scintillations
    a likeness of famed juke joint paintings
    a beauty and sight to behold at this 1:15 am,
    Perchance I meet Nicole
    T&T beauty queen
    Who shows her pride & heritage in every mash she puts down
    To "Sweet, Sweet T&T"
    we were free
    free to enjoy each others company without the pretenses,
    with out the cares of what happens beyond shadows,
    without external interferences
    twas an enjoyable evening
    that is, Until 3:40am
    the atmosphere transforms into a feeding frenzy
    of ravenous carnivores
    looking to scavenge
    like insects upon rotting flesh
    Seeming like some type of bull dance
    What was an even scaled environment
    is now imbalanced
    a 6 to 1 male to female ratio
    an obvious cockblock central

    Atmosphere

    Horny men trying to entice with erectile poses
    Most women wont dance with a man that is prematurely excited
    Unless your manhood can swing below your knees
    then those type men tend to be passing curiosities
    and generally Shallow as wading pools
    Only interested in the size of their own ****
    And how few men can measure up.

    There is a feeling of
    Desperatation in this river of men
    all desirous to woo the few women that are here

    Me?
    I refuse to compete
    for the affections of a woman I've already established a brief
    repoire with
    If she wants to be with me then she will be with me
    If not cest la vie
    I'm not trying to be that testosterone driven drone drowning amongst
    the dogpound trying to chase the cat.
    Chasings cats in a pack can create conflict amongst the dogs
    dogs will fight other dogs to satisfy their own appetites

    I refuse to act the dog when carnal instincts swell up.
    I AM A MAN
    and In my mind a man
    wouldn't willingly stay in an atmosphere with such imbalances --- so
    I leave.

    Following instincts sometimes fares well as in my case
    Nicole pulls my coattail on my verge of leaving this space
    she ask wonderingly why I am leaving
    After I give her a brief explanation she offers to buy me
    breakfast. Today she is still calling me.

    Things can change on you in an instant and how will you react will
    you go with the flow or stick with your instincts?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaa!
    great creative piece and words of power
    the question is would go wit da flow or stay wit ya instincts
    whewwwwwwwwww ya pen laid out a masterful piece here
    tyteeeee bruh
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
    :bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown::bowdown:
    ITs been a long time comin my brotha this was TYTE!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    very nice scribe
    so deep
    flowing strong
    indeed
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    Made me want to read all of the words from beginning to end. Would I go with my instincts? I tend to do much better when I do. Loved this piece.
     
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    this was deep...
    likes ya flow
    is this the one
    ya reading tonight :wink:
    since you didnt finish?????????
    :wave: see in chat
    Peace
    Angel
     
  7. Nahshon

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    thank you all for your lovely words and sentiments...
     
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    Must I say that this is delicious, or do you already know. Much love pa.
    I'm diggin this piece.
    ~Earthly Allure
     
  9. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for your kind words Earthly Allure...
     
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