Black Poetry : Thin Line

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  1. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there's a thin line b/t friends n messin w/friends
    it starts w/a simple question
    or curiousity

    one day it happens
    that kiss
    that touch
    that smile, that drives u wild

    both of us sayin "we're just friends"
    but knowin we want alot more, for sure

    questions start arisin
    where were u?
    y were u gone so long?
    what were u doin?
    who were u with?

    its all a bunch of ****
    that has 2 b dealt with

    now we have overstepped
    the boundaries of friendship

    can we reset the boundaries?
    or should we reject them n continue?

    it'll never b the same
    confusion n complications r gonna remain
    is this sane?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    friendship N' love
    renew da boundaries
    what happen shouldn't
    happen as friendz
    yet if both see far pass
    into a beginning
    then continue
    it sane
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    can we reset the boundaries?
    or should we reject them n continue?

    There's a poetess in our midst-

    1poetsought ~
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx 1poetsought........n thanx to all the other peeps who've responded to my poems............... i feel the love........ a good feelin.. :)
     
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    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmmm.....that line really is thin isn't? it starts with that look, that longing that desire than all "hell" breaks loose...but, friends can be lovers, if the love between them is right...great piece.

    lo'
     
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