Black Poetry : Thief of Poetry : Died Lastnight

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  1. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The spot was packed
    glasses tinkled and
    the atmosphere
    was charged like
    a storm was comin'

    The first poet entered......

    "dat zone"....

    and began to slowly spit
    his well prepared ****
    line for line brought visions
    like hungry fish
    on live bait
    the crowd leaned in
    for every adverb pronoun and profound
    epithet...

    the poet
    began to

    sweat


    then someone near the front of the stage yelled

    hold up ***** !!!.......that's my **** ! 'chu spitting !!!!!



    then came the chrome with the red light
    spittin' toward


    the
    spotlight.





    head lines next day read.....





    .. Thief of Poetry...Died Lastnight ...





    Let me catch you..






    On A Continuous Journey
    Gypsyman
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it's sad to steal yet to go on open mic .............**** !
    u know da poet ain't haven dat ...tell da truth so one's
    ear may hear..
     
  3. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You know, eventhough I got too many infinite zones to be concerned with piracy, I still feel you on that. On top of that, the approach to drop that ill spill was fukkn awesome and that's on the real. I am definitely appreciating your style. holla.
     
  4. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich...Brotherman

    Can u imagine going in a spot and hearin somebody rockin one of your joynts.....I pity the fool..

    peace
    g-man
     
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    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    G, I just try to make sure mine is so original in expression that to jack mine is to expose self by even trying to tell my story. I would be pissed but not to the point where I would extract spirits -just hit 'em up with some hollow point lyrics in they direction.
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feelin this fo sho
    much love gypsyman
     
  7. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah dats some ill ****!!

    So when is da funeral?
    I have a speech...:D :D
     
  8. The Poetic One

    The Poetic One Member MEMBER

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    IT's sad but true people do steal...
    your poetry skill is way to real.


    keep it real!


    THE POETIC ONE
    waking the dead
     
  9. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HOT!
    you got it.
    that musta been sumthin else!!
    -7:spinstar:
     
  10. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    G-Man,

    This is tight!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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