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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by StarGoddess, Jun 22, 2001.

  1. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    they

    were all alone
    wandering through life sullen and unseen,
    lost in their own sorrows until one day

    they

    ran into each other
    and both felt something shift under their feet
    and inside their souls
    as

    they

    dived into each others eyes
    and were baptized
    in instant forgiveness.

    they

    both knew that this may be the moment,
    the synapse that could change everything
    that had ever known
    and give everything

    they

    had ever hoped for
    and

    they

    were scared witless
    by the emotions each emmited and called forth
    in the other-

    they

    were running around back to face to face
    trying to find someplace safe
    to hide-
    trying to find someway to subconciously
    mess things up and chase the other one away
    just to prove their deluded suspicions right---
    that love always leaves.

    they

    made many mistakes and forgave little...
    angry at thier love for the other,
    at their need for the other,
    at the happiness only the other could give...
    as

    they

    tried to learn how to live-
    living out loud and relearning
    the fears that should remain unlearned...
    resenting each other and the desire that rose
    everytime

    they

    drew near to each other---
    repelling each other like an ultra polarized magnet,
    the sysmic forces shifting while they fight
    an unbeatable foe,
    angels hanging their heads low
    while watching these two stumble through
    the best thing

    they

    have ever known
    and may never know again.

    they

    are nothing more than frightened fools
    railing against something supernatural and omnipotent,
    and

    they

    will lose everything important to them if

    they

    don't wake up and just let love rule
    this time,
    everytime,
    from now on,
    and beleive in what they know to be real
    instead of childhood fears and fantasies....

    each other.
    ┬ęcopyright ambroziya snow2001
     
  2. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OH WOW...

    i REALLY REALLY loved this because this is the exact space that i'm in right now. But fortunately i've found someone that i believe is on my level and seeing eye-to-eye with me. I couldn't have said any of this better myself.

    LOVE&RESPECT
    DP2G
     
  3. Destee

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    StarGoddessSupreme :wave:

    Welcome Back!!!!

    good to read you again
    awesome peace Sis

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this flowed, sis

    this moved the way life flows...

    I saw myself in 'them'.

    thank you

    a