Black Poetry : They Say

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Nov 28, 2001.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    They say
    I've gone crazy

    Off the hook
    And in a daze

    They say
    I'm temporarily
    Not in tact

    And the way I react
    Nonchalantly
    I know I don't care
    What they want


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    They say
    I'm lame and I'm stupid

    Clueless
    And don't know what I'm doing

    But they don't know
    That love rains
    Showers me
    And plaques me like an art

    Oh, If only they could have
    What I got

    Hmm,
    Trust me,
    "It's already been brought"

    You don't know
    What your eyes can't see

    And although
    I hate you
    Hassling me

    Yes it hurts
    When you thinks
    Someones against you

    But I'm enjoying myself
    Being me
    And being complete

    I'm enjoying the freedom

    They say I'm noisy
    That I talk too loud

    Well they don't know me
    So how can they tell me
    Not to be so proud

    Yea, I'm loud
    And my joy
    comes through my fears
    And my conflicting peers

    Because I see a vision
    So pure
    In my quiet sleeping

    And I know
    Where it's coming
    Strait to the heart

    Me corazon
    Is loud
    Expressionate
    Sometimes Opionated
    But alwayz updated
    NEver belated

    So what they say
    Dosn't matter anymore

    I must ignore

    What

    They Say.

    Desert Storm
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Storm

    yo storm
    how you be
    you know sometimes
    you just got to do you
    you know

    Peace
    DSSNY
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DS

    You still droppin hard ma... You know I dig it!

    Madd Love
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  4. Desert Storm

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    Tank You!

    Tanks for your supports guys, although I mispelled plagues(plaques) it's all good! ha ha ha. Every time I read what I wrote I alwayz find somewhere I messed up and it's kinda funny reading all the mess I wrote when I waz feeling it in the spur of the moment. Ha ha ha. It's really funny.
    Sincerely,
    Desert Storm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    all good is right storm !

    vibe as u wave in thoughts
    keep scribing yo way