Black Poetry : They Do Not Converse

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The constellations
    do not converse
    with you tonight
    They are pre-occupied
    ...busy
    busy in maintaining
    stability
    Burning cored heat
    to keep subtle
    sensibility

    The nights
    The boundless nights
    They do not converse
    and they do not think
    of you
    They are occupied
    with casting out
    the demons of
    spotted darkness
    Stretching long
    fingers to stroke
    the outer rings of
    some saturned
    vapors

    The endless list of poems
    They do not converse
    Perhaps the poetry
    does not think of you
    When as accomplished
    ornaments they will
    deck some silvery
    sharp shelved books
    in array
    pivoted by people
    in winters bright
    white



    (c) 2002 FINDING SO(u)LUTIONS
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hummmm!! N2

    now the way this flowed out to canvas
    makes me just sit and think deeper
    i love when u spray ya soul into it all:D
    BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN:heart: :kiss:
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$

    If this piece made you think or think deeper, ... then I accomplished my goal as a writer! :D


    Thanks for the read!


    N2
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2.


    ...now you & i both know, you always bringin'
    da deep-ness. :) i hate havin' those nights
    when the heavens won't speak to you... & even
    reading your old pieces doesn't inspire a single
    poetic thought. those are the nights when i
    try to remember... you don't ALWAYS have
    to have something to say... thanks for sharin' sis!!

    AlwaysPeace.
    SunShyne~
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SISTAH SUNSHYNE

    I absolutely love it when someone (like yourself) can actually vibe with exactly what I was articulating in a piece.....

    Let's me know I'm dead on point, if at least one person can peer through the soul of N2 and pick up on what I'm sayin' through scribe!

    (hey ma, do you have ESP or what?) :lol:

    Thanks sistah frynd for reading & responding --

    We're seeing the same thing right ----> Here we vibin' GA!!

    Always :heart:


    :D N2
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2,

    I must say you are "the" poet. I had to push this to the forefront cause it must be read (and besides I forgot to reply to it last time)

    blak
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak

    :D :D :D Thank you Bookie :D :D :D



    :lol: you make me smile, thanks for the props love!


    Always :heart:

    N2
     
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