Black Poetry : They Decided to Meet on an Island, Revisited...Part 3

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The night air was brisk
    as the ferry docked
    rushing off to go ashore, most
    of the eager passengers flocked
    But two took their own sweet time
    disembarking that boat
    So intrigued they were with each other,
    as they walked, they seemed to float
    Adrift in each other's sky,
    they quietly strode
    Until they came upon their destination
    a quaint lady liberty abode
    They tasted each other's lips
    upon entering their lair
    She was his sweet nectar
    He, her tiger lily blossoming there
    She drew a bath, adding vanilla jasmine....
    just a bit
    He dimmed the lights, admiring the
    purple candles that were lit
    The water was warm and inviting
    to her delicate skin
    As he joined her in the tub,
    she forgot what dimension she was in
    Relaxing, sipping white wine, his naked
    caramel skin, begging to be caressed
    Knowing looks, and gentle sighs
    did more than merely suggest
    She was inebriated by him
    lost in his bubbly ocean
    To think this tryst had only just begun
    was more than just a notion
    It was poetry in fact
    Poetry in motion....
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Watz

    The beginning is so so sweet...when you're with the one you love. :D

    :thanks: for sharing...now I have to find the others and read them too. :D

    :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome scribing watz u still beinging it sweet and smooth
     
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    And then the reality sets it, huh money? Just joking....I hope you enjoy reading the other parts to the installment as well. Thank you brotha.
    Thank you Rich. Yea, I do what I can to keep that vibe going, appreciate your support.
     
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    Okay can a sista get a part in that story? :) Wooo I got lost in it girl...just lost in it. Wonderful write.

    "Poetry in Motion"....

    That is was poet , that it was.

    -Me
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Muse, thank you for letting me know you got lost in this flow.
     
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    aw girl, if you could see me when I was readin this, I was all kicked back in the chair mesmerized. I love the way you tell a story. And this is laid down so nicely.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you gempis. I love reading your responses, you share what you truly feel. Much appreciated sis.
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    you said it watz...this was
    "poetry in motion"

    go get in a jasmine bath (with a hint of vanilla)
    and lay on back...you deserve it...
     
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    vanilla jasmine...I LOVE that scent :cry: lol
    See i knew you writing for me sista lol j/k :)
    Love it indeed...:read:
     
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