Black Poetry : They Decided to Meet on an Island, Revisited...Part 2

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    They left the coffeehouse
    but the jazz remained in their mind
    as the two headed for the ferry
    they envisioned music of a different kind
    Hand in hand they boarded the boat
    and they each looked out at the ocean
    she was a bit nervous
    he was filled with emotion
    She said she was so glad they
    were together....her voice shook a tad.
    He didn't notice that she was ill at ease
    because he wanted to kiss her so bad.
    As the vessel left the dock, the wind was
    brisk, they embraced each other tightly.
    They swayed to the tune they last heard
    in the cafe, as the moon serenaded them brightly.
    Just to be able to hold him, almost made her
    heart skip a beat.
    She wanted to kiss him right then and there
    but alas, she had such cold feet.
    As they held each other, the warmth between
    them simply could not be denied.
    She felt so good, he squeezed her tighter
    and in unison they both sighed.
    They entered their own world amongst the
    other passengers, caught in each others eyes.
    Spellbound were they as their lips touched
    a passionate kiss, under star speckled skies.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I've always loved this series...
    you should truly consider a book, really...
    the imagery in this flow
    is Incomparable.
     
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    "speckled skies...."

    This is lovely, just soothing and pretty. Wow.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, that book....one day. Your words humble me so often sage, glad you enjoyed the imagery. Thank you.
    So good to know you were impressed by this one, thank you gempis.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u know i enjoy this here and how u really made this so sweetly
    untouched flow on
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice flowing, enjoyed the read
    it was sweet
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Happy you felt this was sweet Rich, and enjoyed the read. Thank you so much.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for the read blkangel, much appreciated.
     
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