Black Poetry : They Decided to Meet on an Island in Egypt

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Down the majestic Nile they float
    astounded, they disembark their boat
    en route to an Egyptian rendezvous
    they inhale taking in the mystical view.
    They, on this jewel of the Nile
    caught in the exquisite embrace,
    in the splendor of it all, halting
    the cypher of time and space.
    They are truly at home now.
    A king, majestically witnessing
    the sun blessing the pyramids of the
    motherland. The golden rays, kissing
    their illumination. She adorns him
    with his crown within the amulet of his being.
    A queen sensing all that he offers
    from within, third eye seeing.
    She, with sphinx like motions
    caresses his regal pride.
    Pondering, would he allow this fever
    to be the guide to her passionate side?
    Alas, their caravan awaits them.
    The king takes the queen by the hand
    and together they are whisked away
    to their castle beyond the sand.
     
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    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel you exactly sister watz. I believe you and i might be flowing in the same sea. I'm digging this piece wonderfully.
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad to know you're digging this piece Dior, I humbly thank you. I had a series about 2 meeting on an island, and the next location they were supposed to grace was Egypt, so, here they are.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!!!!
    i felt all of this and love how it took me on this Island
    tyte drop sistah lovin it
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Rich for taking a trip to this Egyptian island of these two adventurous souls. Glad you enjoyed it so.
     
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    Mawelulu1Luv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :luvv:A Beautiful Timeless muse upon Eternal Love...


    I Adore this Wonderful Poem :luvv:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much Mawelulu1Luv for your very kind words and support.
     
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    awwwwwwwwwe so nice and refreshing I luv your writing, keep it coming
    very very nice drop
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks TheOne for stopping by and giving me such encouraging words to read.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love it

    I love it

    I love it

    This series...is so mystical :sand:
    now if I could only find somebody to meet me
    somewhere...I might be all right...lol :coffee:

    Seriously...you work is Brilliant :spinstar:
     
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