Black Poetry : These two little boys

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Oct 17, 2002.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    These two little boys play together in he sun...
    catching insects than let them go just for fun

    one talks about Jezus
    one about Mohammed
    it does,nt matter
    they have one thing in common

    They chase cats climb in trees
    or sit together and watch Sesamestreet

    one talks about Jezus
    on about Mohammed
    it does,nt matter
    they have one thing in common

    Food ,candy,drinks they share
    their friendschip is so pure so rare

    one talks about Jezus
    one about Mohammed
    it doesnt matter
    they have one thing in common

    They walk to school ......
    "they " are cool..

    one talks about Jezus
    one about Mohammed
    it doesnt matter
    they have one thing in common

    They stand up for eachother
    when Big guys picking on them
    they also fight together somethimes but they
    make up and shake eachothers hands

    one talks about Jezus
    one about Mohammed
    it doesnt matter
    they have one thing in common

    In summertime they play by the sea
    building sandcastles ........they are free

    one talks about Jezus
    one about Mohammed
    But it doesnt matter.......


    They have "ONE THING " in common....
     
  2. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i want to dedicate to the world leaders in the hope that they will
    read this one day,

    and to my old friend "karima"
     
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    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that connection that at times i wonder if i'm the only one who believes...

    nice peice hun.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well said .....nice piece
    surely some day one's eyes will see
     
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    I enjoyed this but it does matter, because i talk about Jesus and he talks about Muhommed yet we can not stay together although love has rested in our hearts, having children would tear us apart because I talk about Jesus and he talks about Muhommed and they will be raised Muslim no matter what....

    Thanks for the read... I enjoyed this
     
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    I respect the essence of your flow in it’s purity
    And although nothing is quite that simple in this ambiguous world of hues of gray
    Commonality is an awful good place to start
    Nice piece
     
  8. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    desert.....if they will be raised with love.......than everything would be fine.......
    cause thats what i ment with they have one thing in common and that is the treu essence of god and meaning of god ....
    love......
    my real message in this poem is a lot off mature people talk about religion......but they dont live it..........they get stuck and they make war........but thanks enyway so i could explain it more
     
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    i appreciate the feedback it's an interesting time for me because i'm christian i understand what you're saying i showed my boyfriend your poem and he liked it ... what does hetzi mejen mean? sorry if i spelled it wrong
     
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    WAR .........................................
    .and god said that we are not allowed to steal from other country,s
    that every country has his own blessings...

    its not right..................................and both sides are praying to the same god......(the god of love)...
    there will come a time.......................maybe soon.....when there..
    is nothing to war about.............
    there will be no land to stand on.....to make war ....
    there will be no weapons..to make war........
    we will only be standing next top eachother ....thinking ..who is going to safe our soul.....now

    pray for guidance for yourself and others.................
    .
     
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