Black Poetry : These tears aren't for you <for Rico

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  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is for Rico... This is how that woman will be in one year and this is how YOU will be (mark my words sweetie):)


    Hey mami how you doing?
    Oh me? Heck I'm fine
    It's almost been a year now
    I admit that you still look fine
    So how is your boyfriend?
    Oh I am so sorry to hear tha news
    He left you for an 19 year old?
    Man, it must give you the blues..
    Well, Mami..why am I hear?
    You called me out the blue..
    It's been a year since...
    Wait...you want me to get back with you??


    Ha! you know thats funny?
    Who knows what life has in store
    You chose to leave the relationship
    You said"I couldn't give you more"
    I would have offered you my heart
    would have tore it out with my bare hands
    But you turned your lips up
    And you contiuned with your silly demands
    I know I wasn't the richest man
    But I had a fortune of love
    I would give you the world at your feet
    If you just showed me that love
    You left me,dying
    My world was dark and black
    I was ready to kill myself
    From that ,no going back

    But 1 year from now...
    I sit in your face alive and with a smile
    You want to know why mi ex novia?
    ..That woman over there is having my child..!
    When you left me..
    The pain cut like a knife
    But God had a plan for me
    And so..I met my soulmate, my wife
    Why do you look so shocked?
    You thought that I'd been dead or dumb?
    I'll never leave her for you...
    Where did THAT idea come from?

    You wanna know why I'm crying?
    These tears are full of joy!
    The satisfaction of knowing that you failed
    When you left a man for a boy!

    Now if you'll excuse me
    Me and my wife must be on our way
    We have an appointment
    For an ultrasound today

    And by the way Mami?
    Please don't look disgrunted
    Someone beautiful wanted all of me..
    All of the love that you never wanted

    Here's a tissue..
    Please dry those tears
    I wil forget all about you this second...
    Though you will think of me for the rest of your years.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    surely he will love dis
    beautiful heart felt flow
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was really nice...i hope rico reads this...
     
  4. Rico

    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Swt...that was awesome..thanks so much..you lifted my spirits..put a smile on my face...much love
    Rico
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweetie you are so welcome..Whatever it took for me to get the clouds from under your eyes :)
     
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    awwwwwwwwwwww

    SwtT...this was sooooo nice of you. You are soooo full of love. I'm glad that you got the clouds out from under his eyes!!!!
     
  7. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Alize. I hated the position he was in...I decided to lift his spirits just a lil bit :)... I guess he's feelin better these days :heart:
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was extremely powerful hun.....
    Lovin dis flow.

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see why your name is SwtT:)
    very very sweet Poet.
    Peace
     
  10. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwww, SwtT your so considerate....this was beautiful!
    Rico has a valued friend in you!
     
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