Black Poetry : these hot quotes shock folks so I’m caught in the crossfire with thoughts

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    these hot quotes shock folks so I’m caught in the crossfire with thoughts
    and lost desires, which requires some getting use to, so I bought
    a cookbook to plan my destiny while shook on a recipe that’s provide
    mad food to a bad attitude and it’ll flow clean as protein that collide
    with blood streams while on the club scene, so yall pass the cornflakes
    THEIR GREAT like TONY THE TIGER, drink milk never adorn fakes
    so I got fact and vocab a little but caught right smack dab in the middle
    of a grammar fest and my glamour not the best all I can do is try fiddle
    with words, my stats raw like a cat’s paw and it’s a phat naw to rapping
    whack, so check this yall this place appear to be far away and I’m here napping
    in my car today just drove along a path it took strong math to figure out the task
    became bigger no doubt because the map trigger stout misdirection and atlast
    found myself lost on a remote road some snakes exist wow how do I escape
    this? And make this a crisp adventure?, at the gym my attitude is iron
    so I’m in this forest of tainted woods this ain’t good saw a FOOD LION
    trying to put his two cents in this here, he owns a big store so he’s hard
    to ignore, have to be sincere when I say life begin here, forgot my credit card
    this is survival of the fittest and since my arrival I’m the wittiest on this boulevard
    if I make a mistake my cake is baked time to take a bow and somehow chill
    My day begin swift
    like wind drifts
    and again I sniff
    my own
    Cologne while at home so my stats strong
    like SAMSON gone
    To meet DELILAH,
    she’s on fiyah
    she may mess with my strength
    wears tight dress at short length
    Doe, now I’m aware
    but how dare cats criticize and say nonsense
    Acting witty and wise but dense
    to reality, this stuff attack the heart
    Like abstract art all these facts spark and throw black darts so farts
    Run, it’s butterly filtered
    and utterly bewildered
    ride in baby strollers
    My raps greater and perhaps later takeover and make shoulders
    Hurt from the weight it’s best the dumb escape and like boulders
    This stuff come tumbling down
    and rumbling the ground
    folders Open in archives
    hoping to be alive after a landslide rocks fall
    And stop all activity I’m at liberty to say this it’s not fair at all
    Grab a girl to marry have vocabulary and salary with hardcore fate
    Pay bill before date it’s falls due this is all true to exist up-to-date
    Not great to anticipate end up being in debt and seeing sweat drip
    Off my eyebrow, try chow no bread on the table reality comes to grip
    Look I advance upon towns and see romance all around a chance to
    Be down with chicks but fall on the ground quick when tackled by true
    Love, look in the cipher writing is like holding a rifle and fighting never
    Dispute fate just shoot straight or be nutty like a fruit cake forever
    Galore haters be at the doors of my theaters ready to show the wrong
    Movie nothing groovy about these wicked tickets that are sold from their home-
    Base I grab the phone to erase these frequent events that cements the public
    On recent subjects about street violence hard to keep silence be at clubs quick
    Get true friction in a new position don’t care if strange or not had to change
    My spot now standing outside looking in, a test and thrill to win but rearrange
    My strategy until then got to fly so good-bye catch you later and use a rhyme list
    To dispatch a greater verse even an alligator thirst for GATORADE so crisp
    it’s a sure thing to wear pure bling it’s a real cure to cling to fashion at this
    time and write some phat rhymes and let cats find this cool, there’s no risk
    have no time to spare in a blind affair this girl has fine hair that I’m gonna
    Run my fingers through it I do git hot from time to time as a love donor
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Mad love on dis here !
     
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    thanks RICH working on a part 2 for this one
     
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    upping
     
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    Enki thanks for the props on this one got to keep on doing it
     
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