Black Poetry : these eyes...

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  1. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    these eyes……

    these eyes are mine and they look into your soul…
    sometimes they are scared, sometimes brave, sometimes
    tears fall from these eyes, tears of joy, tears of sadness,
    tears of love

    These eyes sometimes cannot see what is standing in front them
    And they go on wondering about, looking wanting, searching
    For a reason…. reason why, a reason why…

    Am I sometimes better of blind to the hate, malice, confusion,
    Destruction…
    Or am I better of seeing the love, compassion and love…
    These eyes hurt me, yet they comfort me at times when humanity
    Triumphs…

    These eyes..
     
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    ShayShay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This poem was dope, I totally feel what you are saying
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sista again u done it openly
    i'm feel ya here love how u vibe
     
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    those eyes watched as you layed this masterpiece on us. the eyes is the window to the soul. nice flow
     
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    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u all.....i'm always grateful for replies...this poem...is never finished, for eyes never stop looking even when we dead, the eyes of the soul continue..

    lo'
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    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    true liberation indeed my brotha...u know i'm feeling u...

    by the way, i tried signing up for the talkingdrum.com e-mail and they won't let me send e-mails because they say i'm involved in 419 scams!!!!!!!!!!! watsup with that, anyway, its still a crucial site..very informative.

    lo'
     
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    well done poet
     
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