Black Poetry : "these days" (freestyle... )

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Sep 16, 2003.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    these days...
    and this is for my peeps....
    the economy is knee-deep in quicksand
    so be sure b-4 you go "beep beep"
    you can afford that jeep
    or else you'll hear that repo- tow truck in the middle of your
    sleep
    and all you have is a "****!" :cry: :oops:
    running to your front door with busted Hanes and a fading view
    and a set of keys to piss you off more!!!

    these days...
    and this is for my fellas....
    who like them brown, black, puerto rican and yellas
    who think "player"
    ask Kobe about court and he'll tell you his date....
    oh, you clown,
    you thought l was talking about a sport??
    condoms wont stop your tires from a good slashing
    but
    it will save you madd years on child support and clashing
    with a baby mama
    now do you want that drama?
    trust me you're safer with Osama

    these days...
    gotta stay true to you...
    and get mad at me....
    but l didn't vote.... if l bite down on too many sweet lies
    l just may get cavities
    the way l see it
    politicians lie, savagely
    l admit
    l'll be living lavishly...
    just give me God, my girl, a little lovin' to go with that
    and my green
    and you'll be voting off tragedy...

    these days...
    gotta stay true
     
  2. SkinDeep

    SkinDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm feelin this.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WORD UPPPPPPPPPPPP!!!!
    dis freestyle is off da hook
     
  4. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Stay true..
     
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    tight and all true...keep on
     
  6. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, this is true.. I love it!
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    whoa....

    "oh, you clown,
    you thought l was talking about a sport??
    condoms wont stop your tires from a good slashing
    but
    it will save you madd years on child support and clashing
    with a baby mama
    now do you want that drama?
    trust me you're safer with Osama "

    dude...you had me crack'n up ova here with da punchlines...
    brah you are so right
    gotta stay tru
    we need you more around here...
    peace
    khasm
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovin' this...
     
  9. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    these days
    when i look for hope and reason to believe
    my brotha J'hiah gives me the assurance that i need :)
    dis was the :bomb: but hey its J'hiah :)
     
  10. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    such knowledge...

    it even shines in ya freestyle...

    this was def' on point (with a lil twist of humor, lol)

    however, the substance? def' wise words from a very wise brother
     
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