Black Poetry : There's alwayz a choice ....

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  1. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wish that I could erase ur pain
    and destroy ur lonliness
    ur heartache is unbearable
    and I can't force myself 2 accept it

    I have sat back and watched
    the pain literally
    pour from ur heart
    and it broke mine everytime u cried

    And thru it all I've remained
    unable 2 intervene
    because u've chosen
    2 handle ur own situation
    and I must respect that

    But tell me why, why
    ohh why
    do u feel u deserve this
    I know u want more than
    what u have allowed 2 come in ur life
    but still u dwell in this circumstance

    Now I am not the one 2 judge
    or point fingers
    but it's obvious u don't truly love urself
    anyone who did
    would've cut the cord
    on all this madness that's occuring
    and yet u continually stick with it

    And I always ask myself
    how could I take u away from all the pain
    cause it really doesn't have 2 be this way
    you can change
    and see better dayz....

    and even though ur out there on ur own
    don't give up sunshine
    4 the darkness
    and misery u've allowed
    2 enter and reside in ur life

    This is my final plea 2 u
    I will not ever discuss this again
    I wash my hands of ur decisions
    cause ur life is truly ur own
    and u are sholl nuff grown

    But don't take ur time
    and let this linger on
    cause it's just like the buttons
    on an elevator: It will take u up or bring u down

    It's ur life, ur happiness that's at stake
    so sleep now if u want to
    but after the good night's rest
    what will u do in the morning when u wake?
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    this poem was real poet

    4real
    DSS
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    gurl dis here ya hit wit truth and feelings ...
     
  4. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is great your opening verse is my favorite part

    "I wish that I could erase ur pain
    and destroy ur lonliness
    ur heartache is unbearable
    and I can't force myself 2 accept it"

    deep ****, hun.
     
  5. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DSS Thank you for feeling me friend
     
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    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $RICH$ I will always make the truth known thru my feelings..
    Thanks for the response $RICHNE$$
     
  7. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks LiLi for all da love and support..
    I appreciate that so much
     
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