Black Haiku : ...there'll be days like this...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ShadeeLadee, Mar 23, 2002.

  1. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the burden of love
    people don't talk about, much
    cause love is worth it

    SWT
     
  2. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You ever read a poem that touched your soul so much that you wished that you were the author...just for a moment :)?

    This haiku is the hard hitting truth. When I read this haiku I said..."Man, this is so right ON! I wish I had wrote this one!"

    the burden of love
    people don't talk about, much
    cause love is worth it

    Whether it's your spouse, your children or your friends...this haiku is befitting of love...period.

    Thanks for the read...I made my soul do dis here :jumping:

     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!!! is all i gotta say..... love hearing da truth
     
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    yes, indeed... I am feeling all you're saying, and then some.

    thank you, love

    :heart:

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    Joyce..u summed it up!

    Naked was this truth!

    Great work poet
     
  6. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That you would say "poet" when referring to me is beyond an honor, sister Hunter. I don't consider myself a poet, I struggle to express myself on most days. Mama Alyce knows that's the truth, anyhow. :D

    But sometimes, God gives me the words to say what's in my heart. I ain't in control when that happens. Joyce, your words make my soul glad!! Thank you all for reading.

    :heart:

    Shade
     
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    Shadee

    Very special haikus.
    Thanks for sharing. :)


    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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