Black Poetry : "There"

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When I touched you
    "there"
    you shivered

    For my caress of your erogenous exit zones
    had been
    a long time coming

    I sense a sureness
    in your want for
    my warmest embrace
    and
    I am certain I need to hold you
    forever

    Delicately, gently,
    I converged upon your softness
    as my fondling of your physical desires
    "there"
    told the secrets
    of
    emotions past
    and
    consciousness
    present

    You had wanted me
    "there"
    so I could feel you
    with my mind

    Your every
    arresting moan of ecstasy
    rang deep inside my head
    educing
    images of
    anticipated pleasure

    Favoring you with my own cries of enchantment,
    our mutual
    sexualities
    moved
    towards love

    Would I exist
    "there"
    within you
    if we made
    passionate love?

    Surely
    I would carry your heart
    in my memories
    for lifetimes to come…
    so as
    never to forget

    Could we remain
    "there"
    and in this,
    our fantasy,
    to appreciate
    the need in me for you?

    If my soul could reason,
    it would be heard
    in the sweetest of breaths
    imploring of you to sanction me
    to further my touching you
    tenderly and soothingly
    "there"

    So please accept
    my sensuous
    charm and grace
    as I touch you
    and love you deeply
    "there"
    from now on…

    ©GQINC2K2
     
  2. Aminata

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    and

    "there" YOU go!!!!! :rolleyes:

    I thank you gon take some sistahs "there" with this peace!!!:love:



    :heart:
    Aminata
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

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    you dawg i'm loving the innuendo
    man

    loving the flava man
     
  4. Joyce

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    By the time I finished reading this beautiful and sensuos poem...I was hating with a passion that the Red Tide was in :bawling:
     
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    What does GQ mean? Gotta have something to do with extraterrestrial Good Bar Quality or sum'n or was I even close? I don't even know, son but what I do know is that you be saying some thangs that I can't envision to say. Don Juan ain't got that much game. The playa from the himalayas can't even contest! Dog, you must be in it for the nookie. Ok, let me stop...we all know you just do the do the way you do, so big up to another smooth *** joint.
     
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    str8 off da love vibe so smoovee tyght piece bru Q...
     
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    Beautiful flow...GQ

    Epiphany :heart:
     
  8. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :lol: @ Joyce

    Thanks all for the read!!!

    :peace: to the brothas
    :heart: to the sistas
    GQ
     
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    BigHead.


    umm mmm mmm! ...& There... it is!!

    (you always gotta be startin' sumthin'!) :lol:

    :heart:
    MEB.
     
  10. j'hiah

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    you definitely took it there bruh :toast: