Black Poetry : There

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Amun-Ra, Feb 26, 2002.

  1. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Into delighted darkness,
    a chimera of thought takes hold
    and on the soft breeze of summer’s night
    the moment’s question will unfold.
    An interrogative that barely waits,
    for civility and manners make it so.
    Yet, the question burns the tongue;
    as my pleading ears want to know.
    Please forgive me for my reticence,
    but it is not simple to lay a soul laid bare.
    So, I say this with sweet passion’s truth
    and ask you, “can I touch you there?”
     
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    RA!!! The master of verb manipulation!!! You betta flow POET!!!
     
  3. Amun-Ra

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    It was a thought

    This question crossed my mind on numerous occassions when I fell in love and wanted to move on to the next stages--I never forgot my manners--although some would condemn me for it and say just go for it--I always wanted to be invited--Ra

    ;)
     
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    well......

    a
     
  5. Amun-Ra

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    By Invitation Only!

    An invitation always makes sure the dooor is open and I am a welcome guest--Ra

    :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man u gotta be da star of da show !
    and when u wonder to da stage of lovin it
    makes it mark ........u flow on and keep pressing on
     
  7. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well...uhmmm, i'm lovin' it, as usual.
     
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    The Poets Poet for sure. Nice Ra.

    BE
     
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    Bravo...

    and sometimes it's nice to be asked.

    Great job... loveded it to death.
     
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    Just Being Polite

    A little finesse goes a long way sometimes--then there are other times, but if you don't know--pull over and ask somebody!--don't be an uninvited guest even if you're tolerated--Ra

    :)