Black Poetry : There is only us,Places in me you touch

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  1. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There is only we
    There is only us
    The things we go threw only us we trust
    Stepping out in the midnight air
    Feel to me like a call to prayer
    Whose hands don't reach into the dark of the night?
    Seeking to understand what is unknown by sight
    We were born into darkness, to darkness we return
    To that eternal author whose flame will always burn
    Though darkness travail be full upon me
    Light shall be born to me as unto the hills
    This darkness around me is dawn unborn
    In the cold of the night you keep me warm
    All this separation is only in the mind
    There is only spirit working from behind
    I will be what I will be
    Was the voice threw eternity
    Ayer Asher Ayer
    O great God take me higher
    Don't call me this don't call me that
    When the Diviner throws His shells it is me upon the mat
    Too much dam distance drifting between you between you And I
    If eliminating existence is error then Why is life born to die? :confused:
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    I can take this peace in so many ways...lost love comes to mind.

    :thanks: for sharing.

    :toast:
     
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    only us a we i feel ya here big time as my mind runs
     
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    Thnkx- Its about lost love for sure.
     
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    as tyme roll what's lost will be found if within self allows it to be
    surely this was deep
     
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    this was deep enjoyed this got my mind running
    thanks for sharing
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    A lost love, memories that remain, bittersweet. Well written piece.
     
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    This is wonderful!!! Much props
     
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    Thankx the lost love is really about God
    but it was written to have dual meanings
     
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