Black Poetry : There is bleu gum under my shoe..

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  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I noticed that there is bleu gum under my shoe...

    Does enyone have a stick?
    gots to get rid of it!
    it is making a disturbance in my walk...

    ****! now its stuck on my hand!

    passenger; "Youre shure its not ****"'

    **** ?
    bleu?
    scary!!!!!? lol
    passenger;"Hey we still dont know the excistance of all creatures on this earth"lol

    mmm?? no....its not ****...
    well......maybe...
    it shure isnt '"flubber"'
    though it lookes like its alive!
    because it wants to stay with me!

    passenger; "'mmm...? Problem?

    Yeah ! just like problems in youre life...
    some of them get stuck on you if you
    dont do nothing about it .........Right!?

    Passenger; "'RIght"'

    Passenger; ""have you tryed the grass"'

    The grass is not always Green on the other side!
    ya know what i mean!lol

    Passenger; "'Yeah there is a lot of **** there to ..Exacly"'lol

    O No! now its stuck on my elbow!

    Passenger;"'Hey i have a tissue ,i can take it off""

    NO ! No!...i dont wanna pass this thing on to you!
    You know you never know if it gets worser!
    you know lol...

    You know what i,m goin to wash it off...

    Passenger: "Do you live far from here"'

    Yes?

    Passenger; "'Dont you feel ashamed when people are looking
    at you with that yukkie thing""



    I would feel more Ashamed....

    if i passed it on to ..

    to you.....
     
  2. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol, funny, yet n' still I feel. i wouldn't want to pass on my troubles to anyone either.

    The Dreamer
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo liberty
    this was deeply written and comfortably felt...
    i love the way you put this....
    nothing is really what it seems on the surface eh?

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u hit a note here as i read and feel da flava
     
  5. MORE

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    wow, this had a funny twist! enjoyed this one, made me smile:toast: :toast:
     
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    right...this was funny...
    me likes dis joint
    peace
    khasm
     
  7. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Me ...happy you liked it khasm lol
    by the way i know now what the Ganja,s and lammas means.....its a new type if ice cream right lllllllllllllolooooooool...
    just kidding much love khas....
    thanks dream,play ,rich,more,



    much love liberty
     
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