Black Poetry : There is a River

[realeyezrealize]

For Rich and Bluewater thanks for the love,
As I am going through what I know is but only for a moment
My hope is dwelling in the manifestion of my deepest LOVE
To fullfill what he has me to
and all I am belongs to him
yet I find myself crying in the showers of his mercy
He still finds me deserving
So the pain of a condition in time
can only be personalized as I arise from my carnal state
However HE has never let me down, nor cast me away
The passion of his LOVE is with me everyday.
So in his name I send much LOVE,
and Thanks.

 

[angelicsage]

realeyesrealize..."love the name"...first and foremost
I love your style of writing
word selection and depth
there was a lot of inner reflection
in this piece...hence your name
one who truly sees...
beyond natural sight
instead has embraced true vision
which comes from within allowing
one to love self..., love others,
enlighten minds that have not yet grasped the concept...
and scribe pieces...of poetry
as magnificent as this...

Continue to let your thoughts flow...
you have a gift...continue to craft it
Peace & Love...
Sage

 

[watzinaname]

And your river flows deeply and richly. Beautiful flow of hope poet.

 

[AfroBoricuaRoni]

So in bravery I make my way to these shores ready to embrace this new taste of living.

I LIKE THAT! This poem is so real. And that's wassup. You better go.

 

[gempis]

Amazing piece! You really hit it right here