Black Poetry : There Goes That Pen Again.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Feb 29, 2004.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There goes that pen again...
    Just click
    that Bic
    move me
    groove me
    coat me
    with passion
    black, red, blue,
    any hue will do,
    it's your voice
    and my choice
    so stroke me
    with seductive ink
    don't give me time
    to think
    just flow
    entice me to lay
    and just take it
    take all that you say
    oh, you do it so well
    make me wanna scream
    make me wanna yell
    from the first verse
    to the last
    your dye
    has been cast
    almost done
    almost over
    Yes
    Yes
    YES
    Last sentence written
    This poetry muse
    has me smitten
    You are the pen
    I am the paper.
    Wow....
    I feel
    so much better now.....
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow
    dig da vibe
    continue on....
    Peace angel
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for letting me know you're diggin this vibe, mzblkangel.
     
  4. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This made me smile, girl. Keep em comin...
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You know, gempis, I sort of had a smirk the entire time I was writing this. Glad it made you smile too.:)
     
  6. Bluewater

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    yeah...:)
    wow ..
    i do know how
    you feel
    liking this sis
    it can surely move ya
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see that pen has done some thangs to you too, sis. :) Thanks for letting me know you're liking this Blue.
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :deal: Nice write.... feeling the flow.
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice to know you're feeling this, thanks caramelpython.
     
  10. YeshuJah

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    Certainly know the feeling. I hope you get smitten on a daily basis by the muse.

    JAH Love is ONE.
     
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