Black Poetry : There Are No Weak Women Here

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  1. dstny

    dstny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (This was written by a very talented lady and I just had to share it)




    I was feeling you.....pretty much
    from the heat in your stare
    to the glide in your touch
    and your dialect
    had conversations with my intellect
    and I did not object
    to the flow of any subject
    even the ones that made you erect
    but let me interject something
    correct something
    there are no weak women here.
    You see the last brotha that tried to play me for a fool
    wasn't aware of the 'ain't no fools here' rule
    and he ended up drowning in a self-made
    pool of stupidity
    are you feelin' me?
    come to this with only one expectation
    I'm not looking for fake love jones situations
    I just have this infatuation
    with brotha's who can bring mental stimulation
    and that's because
    there are no weak women here.
    Understand that good wine and a fast car
    can only get you so far
    and it's not good to drink and drive
    because you are DWI
    Dealing With Intelligence
    so check yo'self before you wreck yo'self
    'cuz I mastered games as a child
    so make this worth my while
    ('cuz I'm GROWN)
    come to me with some style
    overdose on some class
    don't just try waxin' the ***
    cuz I'm not yo' ride
    and without breakin' my stride
    I will read, write, and erase you~~
    all with one look
    because,
    there are no weak women here.
    Don't take this the wrong way
    I'm not trying to say
    that I'm too good
    I'm just too good for games
    and played out playa names
    and played out playa skills
    I pay my own **** bills
    so i don't want your loot
    'cuz robbin' brotha's blind ain't cute
    I have no need, nor the desire
    to set any of your **** on fire
    I just want to be able to fly higher
    with a man who is down--to the wire
    who is not afraid of a strong mind
    who is not afraid of emotions, any kind
    who is not afraid of strong woman visions
    or a woman who makes strong woman decisions
    a man who can let a strong woman cry
    and not mistake the tears from her eyes
    as a sign of weakness
    admire her uniqueness
    and when he steps to her, he'll step to her strong
    'cuz he knows any other way would be wrong
    because.....
    there are no weak women here.
     
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    while this a beautiful write let me warn you that if this post is not your work
    it cannot be added to this site without written permission of the owner , name
    or website / email addyor statement that you could add there work here .

    This against our forum Rules please visit it at
    http://destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=8084 rule # 2

    so at this time i ask that you remove someone else property from this forum
    until you recieve permission in writing or add it into the post Thank you very much
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  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Please give this talented lady my props. My Lord, I was shaking my head in agreement all through this sensational piece. The message was so powerful and real, and it flowed so smoothly. We do teach people how to treat us.... Awesome piece.
     
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    Sister Dstny ... i'm so proud of you !!!! :love:

    Adding the property of others in this community, has been a long standing rule, one which i've received lots of flack about over the years ... but i've remained steadfast in my desire to respect the property of our Sisters and Brothers ... regardless of how others may feel about it.

    During the many years that this has been in effect, i can count on one hand the number of Members that have been willing to take the time to receive such permission! I am so proud of you !!! You make my heart and Spirit smile! It is such an honor to have you with us!

    As we all can see in the response you received from the owner of this work, they too were appreciative of your taking the time to ask for permission. It is such a small thing to do, yet many do not feel it is necessary.

    I am Proud of You!

    Below is your initial request to the owner and their response. Your request is in red, and their response is in blue.

    Again, Thank You Very Much!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Back to the top!

    Thanks for sharing.
     
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    very power scribe thank you for sharing this authors work with us

    Angel
     
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