Quiet Poetry Lounge : There Are No Weak Women Here

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by dstny, Mar 17, 2005.

  1. dstny

    dstny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There Are No Weak Women Here


    I was feeling you.......pretty much
    from the heat in your stare
    to the glide in your touch
    and your dialect
    had conversations with my intellect
    and I did not object
    to the flow of any subject
    even the ones that made you erect
    but let me interject something
    correct something
    there are no weak women here


    you see the last brotha that tried to play me for fool
    wasn't fully aware of the 'ain't no fools here' rule
    and he ended up drowning in a self-made
    pool of stupidity
    are you feelin' me?
    come to this with only one expectation
    I'm not lookin for fake love jones situations
    I just have this infatuation
    with brotha's who can bring mental stimulation
    and that's because
    there are no weak women here


    understand that good wine and a fast car
    can only get you so far
    and it's not good to drink and drive
    because you are DWI
    Dealing With Intelligence
    so check yo'self before you wreck yo'self
    'cuz I mastered games as a child
    so make this worth my while
    ('cuz i'm GROWN)
    come to me with some style
    overdose on some class
    don't just try waxin' the ***
    cuz i'm not yo' ride
    and without breakin' my stride
    I will read, write, and erase you~~
    all with one look
    because,
    there are no weak women here


    don't take this the wrong way
    I'm not trying to say
    that i'm too good
    i'm just too good for games
    and played out playa names (like boo)
    and played out playa skills
    I pay my own **** bills
    so I don't want your loot
    'cuz robbin' brotha's blind ain't cute
    I have no need, nor the desire
    to set any of your **** on fire
    I just want to be able to fly higher
    with a man who is down---to the wire
    who is not afraid of a strong mind
    who is not afraid of emotions, any kind
    who is not afraid of strong woman visions
    or a woman who makes strong woman decisions
    a man who can let a strong woman cry
    and not mistake the tears from her eyes
    as a sign of weakness
    admire her uniqueness
    and when he steps to her, he'll step to her strong
    'cuz he knows any other way would be wrong
    because.......

    there are no weak women here

    rsjsj
    ©1999, the Mytsexxy/Sinsualmind Experience
    Renee'
    aka Sinsualmind

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    Hello,

    Thank you for your kind words, they really humble me. Please do share my
    words with your friends. All that I ask is that you please credit me as
    the author. Again, thank you for your kind words. :)

    Renee'
    aka Sinsualmind
    [email protected]
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice write a powerful meaningful flow
     
  3. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have to agree with $$RICH$$ this is powerful and meaningful.

    Refreshing to a great degree.
    I like how you set the stage
    and the way it has to be.

    I just want to be able to fly higher
    with a man who is down---to the wire

    You dropped it well. Keep flowing.
     
  4. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :cool: This poem was so strong, it could do nothin els but be heard. Beautiful, poem, I like the way it was posed.


    keep the flow goin
     
  5. tichaona

    tichaona Active Member MEMBER

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    i'm just too good for games
    and played out playa names (like boo)
    and played out playa skills
    I pay my own **** bills
    so I don't want your loot
    'cuz robbin' brotha's blind ain't cute
    I have no need, nor the desire
    to set any of your **** on fire
    I just want to be able to fly higher
    with a man who is down---to the wire
    who is not afraid of a strong mind
    who is not afraid of emotions, any kind
    who is not afraid of strong woman visions
    or a woman who makes strong woman decisions
    a man who can let a strong woman cry
    and not mistake the tears from her eyes
    as a sign of weakness
    admire her uniqueness
    and when he steps to her, he'll step to her strong
    'cuz he knows any other way would be wrong
    because.......

    there are no weak women here
    ____________________________________________________

    i totally appreciated this piece. the way it rhymed and still managed to get the point across. one strong woman to another, i give you props for this!
     
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