Black Poetry : Therapy

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Jan 25, 2002.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Burning your picture up was probably the
    best thing I could've done

    therap(you)tic in it's result

    I blew the ashes into the air
    of the living room where

    we once sat and talked about
    a forgotten future and mutual friends
    that now talk of our demise
    and sex that was....so ****
    good that we lasted too long...
    like snow in June

    I blew your ashes into the air
    and watched you drift slowly

    swirling as if you were still trying
    to castrate my spirit with your
    vile words...
    ...only in a more calculated cadence

    see this house is now vacant
    of you...just your ashes remain
    and like therapy I am cleasing my
    life of you

    as I dust of everywhere you
    once were.

    (c)2002 blakverb
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak

    Feelin' betta boo? :wink: Well shat.... afta readin' this one heah, I sure don't need my meds!!


    TYTE scribe (per U - sual)


    :D :D :D

    N2
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    verb, man...this piece is tyght! i absolutely love melancholy pieces and this one is truly jus that...tyght. i really feel the depth of this bittersweet love melancholy. keep on scribin', ma brotha'. yo work is always very enjoyable to read...yes, indeed. oh, yeah...r u alryght?
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Royal BLaK-NeSs.


    ...you are reading my mind this morning.

    'memba when i said "no one can help me with
    my piece"??... you just did!! thank You! :)

    :heart:
    QueenGa~
     
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    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very therap(you)tic...

    u always throw catch phrases and
    metaphors in your flos
    to makie me smirk (in awe) of
    your use of words. very crafty.
    always enjoy readin your verb.
    keep comin blak.


    hw
     
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    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak

    Man it is always nice to come visit your work Bruh.
    Just like all the pieces you have put out this one
    is tyte as hell.:toast:
     
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    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak...

    You touched me with this one!
    So in addition to being a lover and a fighter,
    you're sensitive too!
    I :heart: it!
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    definitely diggin this one.
    i think i read you too much cuz i swear
    i knew what it would say before i got
    to the end!
    LOVE IT!
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    family,

    thank you.

    blak
     
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    Deeper than Atlantis
     
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