Quiet Poetry Lounge : Therapy

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PlayWitItPimp05, Sep 6, 2003.

  1. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Slowly finding strength in just having the
    words formulate in my mouth and mind
    I give repentance in my knowledge
    For my knowledge and ability to speak
    makes me yet is the soul of my sinning.
    The phoenix's liquid solitude is
    raining down upon me
    Black raindrops gleam with the light of
    quicksilver and mercury
    My sense of smell is magnified by this
    overpowering aura of serenity
    and slowly the sun rises out of its clamshell
    Begging for forgiveness
    Because it left me alone to feed my vulnerability.
    I cannot let the neutrality corrupt me.
    I cannot give up the fight for my peace.
    I cannot continue to live by man's creations
    But instead find my own elation
    In natural beauty.

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    let the mental mind flow ....
    feelin ya
     
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    Play, you have penned a vivid and wonderful piece. Flow on!
     
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