Black Poetry : therapy please

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  1. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    how am i gonna get through this day?
    this weather makes me want to come out of my skin...
    it's nauseating...
    i wouldn't feel this way if october 95 never happened
    for me...
    if i'd made better choices
    and though it's spring, not fall
    sometimes my body doesn't know the difference
    cause outside has those same sunny cold windy
    days... march feeling like october
    and the sun sets at the same time
    if i could be spared from these days
    i wouldn't question my sanity
    but because they exist like this for me
    i'd like some therapy, please....



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  2. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wildflower

    I know the feeling of a certain season or a particular color cast on any given day reflecting some unwanted memory ..its like re-living some **** as clear as the smell of the wind reminding you of someones eyes...well..this is what i saw...tyght -thought provoking scribe poet.

    peace
    g-man
     
  3. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man, you're on point!
    i'm glad you know where i'm comin from.
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now i know dis one .....coz i get into that same feeling when
    i bounce out one season to da next wit a crazy twist...
    still i sit on da stup looking forward
     
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    i've had that exact feeling... remembering the pain or hurt of another time like it was yesterday, because of the change of the seasons....the good thing is that all of those things are just memories...u don't have to be there anymore...

    much respect,
    dee
     
  6. Joyce

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    Therapy Lesson One:)

    This works...had to use on myself. PRAY each day this prayer:

    Psalms 4 verse 1
    Answer me when I call to you,
    O my righteous God.
    Give me relief from my distress;
    be merciful to me and hear my prayer.

    Psalms 5 verse 1
    1 Give ear to my words, O Lord ,
    consider my sighing.
    2 Listen to my cry for help,
    my King and my God,
    for to you I pray.
    3 In the morning, O Lord , you hear my voice;
    in the morning I lay my requests before you
    and wait in expectation.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel this piece.
    I'm sure many can relate.
    Scribe On Poetess!


    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  8. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the read, Rich and MizDee...
    i'm glad those days are over...
    even though reminders remain.

    thank you for the "bible relief therapy", joyce...
    you know what i need (pray for me too)...

    coco, thanks, sistah!
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh but when the sun comes out!!

    It shines so brightly... I am feelin this.
    good seasons come to those who wait. tight flow poet!
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mr. marion, i sho appreciate your bright outlook!
    -7:spinstar:
     
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