Black Poetry : Theraputic'ly Speaking

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by brotherman, Apr 10, 2002.

  1. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heed wordz written
    spitten hot with hostility
    imponderable ability
    to decimate facilities
    mentally this imposition
    twice taxing to your spirits
    knowing **** well
    you ain't trying to hear it...

    So let the melody momentarily
    remove the inconvenience
    of intractable wordplay
    that's been testing your sixth sense
    it's been
    intrusive
    to some abusive
    with na'n excuse
    masterful -for real
    when putting skills to use
    yeah
    I'll be that menace
    till the death -but never mimic
    the misapplication of deeds
    promoting an image
    I let it rip upon impulse
    these thoughts that don't corrupt
    although those
    who's self aborbed
    may deem I'm overboard
    I just pack these verbal swordz
    selective with directive
    perspective intuitiveness
    that sometimes seems excessive
    professing argumenatives
    aggressing the diminutive
    wrought train of thoughts
    where ignorance is monumental

    nutritional for a healthy
    state of mind
    I hope to find
    scrupulous behavior
    so we can shine
    in one love
    one light
    to get life right
    before it gets out of our reach
    beyond our sight... aight?
    :rolleyes:
     
  2. MsPoetic

    MsPoetic Active Member MEMBER

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    Mr .Man
    You have done it again .....Over my head on another level !!!
    Keep on Keep on
    Poetic
     
  3. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Write it down Poet.

    BE
     
  4. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Say that then Poet!!

    I'm diggin every bit of it Bruh!!
    Speak on!! Speak on!!:toast:
     
  5. mizdee2002

    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    writing to flex one's own mental musculature? tyte verbalz, brother...

    dee
     
  6. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoopty woo and hooty hoo to my dirty griots!

    and for all the rest -be blessed and thanks for yours. Luv.
     
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    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    rewind this joint --believe it or not this was an apologetic piece
     
  8. blackwoman

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    trying to use big words hunh?
     
  9. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    actually I am trying to stay at the level of some choice posts in here and save my ghetto side for the hot issue joints. can you tell how style changes as issues are born?
     
  10. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and everybody say it with me...amen!
    this is nice!

    One,
    Derrick Jay
     
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