Black Poetry : Then What?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by YeshuJah, Jul 2, 2002.

  1. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Open wide-
    lemme fu.kk you.
    no.
    not your body,
    the spot I'm 'bout to get hot is your mind,
    it's one of a kind.
    Never mind the mini skirt
    and the sexy body most men find attractive-
    slip aside the surprise in your eyes
    and let's mack this, embrace a thought or two,
    start at the end before the beginning's no longer new.
    Deep throat this:
    after the romantic walk in the park
    and the cuddling & fondling in the dark
    and the candlelit dinner over fine wine
    plus a little bit of weed
    and mutual confessions of secret deeds
    during the ride to your place or mine
    and whispers of baby you look so fine
    you got me wet in all the right places
    and we both play our naked aces
    as we plunge deeper and deeper
    into each other's moan
    and exchange mucus with each new groan
    amidst waves of waves of orgasmic
    back arching, teeth clenching, mattress banging,
    sweat glistened screams-
    then what?


    I see..
    somehow you hadn't thought of that.
    Did you?
     
  2. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dayyuumm chile!

    hold up let me go get the fire extinguisher cause you done burned the place up .....
    don't think there is anything else to do after all that :hot:


    ;)
     
  3. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LAWD HAVE MERCY CHILE!

    GO OFF AND COME BACK AND THE PROPHET DONE WENT
    BUCK WILD...THE MESSAGE WAS CLEAR HERE THO MY DEAR
    YOU GOT TO HAVE MORE THAN A BOUNCE IN THE BED...
    YOU GOT TO HAVE SOMETHING TO SHARE FROM THE MAIN
    HEAD!
    NUFF SAID!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!:D
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wooooweeee!!! rock da minds and heat up the souls
    ya on a roll........
     
  5. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    say what!
    something to think about
    hot scribe
     
  6. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very thought provoking piece!!

    Tyte scribe Poet!!
     
  7. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you went there poet...

    i'm offering my bodyguard services just in case some group of fans get a little out of hand...

    weed and wine? what a combination...

    one.
     
  8. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice...very nice and hot.
    I love the way you drop'd
    the end.

    Scribeaboutit! It helps.
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  9. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Family: Natasha, msluciousb, Dnomo,Shaz, Rashaad, RICH & Cocobutter-
    I appreciate the read. I hope you all have a safe 4th.

    JAH Bless.
     
  10. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes

    a little bit of weed!!!!!!!!!! mmmmmmm hummmmm this was on point.




    One