Black Poetry : Then Came You

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  1. onelove1soul

    onelove1soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I've been numb for years, unsure of my path....
    Then came you.
    Unable to reveal all the love that would ever last...
    Then came you.
    Don't think about reaching cloud 9 anymore...
    Then came you.
    Nine is just a number, where I am there is no score...
    Then came you.
    No feelings of inspiration, salvation or concern...
    Then came you.
    Always searching for that higher ground from lessons learned.
    Then came you.
    Wanting, needing, desiring such a dream come true...
    Then came you.
    And I know beyond time there will be such a revelation with minds of two...
    'Cause then came you.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feeling your flow onelove1soul.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte scribe feeling ya here
     
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    This scribe is like a old jazz love ballad :) and I like it
     
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    Hey onelove1soul
    loving the feel from this flow
    very nice
    Peace
     
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    suddenpassion Banned MEMBER

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    Nice Flow!!!!!!!
     
  7. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was oh so sweet.
    Reminds me of the kinda poems you
    scribe in ya sweethearts senior yearbook
    to carry with them throughout the years!
    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  8. Loveall20

    Loveall20 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ........very bomb........
    I wait for the day to express these words.lol
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome! This was very nice, looking forward to more from you.
     
  10. onelove1soul

    onelove1soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you everyone for the compliments.
     
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