Black Poetry : Them Blue Panties

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  1. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    *Inspired by the poetry that I've read tonight, I've decided to post one of my own.*

    Let me admit this from the start
    This woman’s intelligence won my heart

    Her passion and her zeal
    Not to mention her sex appeal

    My vision gets blurry and my knees get weak
    Hell…I can hardly speak

    I can’t help but to fall on my knees
    Every time I see her in those blue panties

    However, I must confess
    They are not the things that make me a mess

    See…she has those sweet brown eyes
    And those healthy, thick thighs

    They do nothing but tease
    But LAWD have mercy on me when I see her in those blue panties

    The sweet taste of her lips
    The contours of her hips

    The nape of her neck
    Can cause a 50 car wreck

    Those are the things that put my mind at ease
    But I **** near cry when I see her in those blue panties

    The licking and sucking of her supple breasts
    The soothing feel from her caress

    All of those things will make me beg…please….please…please
    When I see this sweet, young thang in them blue panties

    What you want woman…I don’t care.
    Would you like to go here…or live over there?

    I don’t know what it is that puts a brotha on freeze
    Every time I see this woman in them blue panties ​
     
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    color me blue
    she sway dem 4 u
    her panties of blue
    has mesmerized u
    to a perfection
    of her direction
    ya heart melts like butter
    every time she come from
    da cover to sho dem blue
    panties
    man i know what u mean
    see dem RED one just take me away !
    wooooweeee !
     
  3. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Thanks for the response...it's appreciated.
     
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    :wave: Monetaryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy :wave:

    ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~

    This peace brought such a smile to my face ... such a pleasure
    to have you here ... reading our words and sharing yours ...
    you know i'm honored ... and you know you're at home ... :kiss:

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Thank you very much for having me...and allowing me to read the words of some gifted poets.
     
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    monetary...brotha u know you a mess. but i like this piece. u can tell u had fun writing it. lol keep it comin
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Thank you...and the sista who inspired it. mm. mm..mm.:D
     
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    Monetary...

    Excellent flow...

    Somethin' about dem damned panties makes a brotha mad crazy!!! :lol:

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    Thanks... ya feel me, huh? lol
     
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    nice write and WELCOME TO THE HOUSE
     
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