Black Poetry : Theif in the night

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  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like a chocolate haze you entered my life.
    And touched my heart.
    Theif in the night.
    You affected my thoughts
    and brought my dream to life.
    Your words were just whispers
    and your kisses were light.
    And in my minds eye we danced
    in the moonlight.
    The love that we made took us into
    flight.
    And it seemed that you held me just
    right.
    But to my dismay you were
    gone with morning light.
    You've stolen my heart.
    Theif in the night.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i know this theif as well
    tight flow
    feeling the vibe
    Peace
    Angel
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thief in the night...sweet thief, came and took your :heart: ...frett not...it's just a sign of love coming forth :huh:
    I myself can live with those kind of thiefs...
     
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    thatgirl,
    Beautifully written flowing expression.
    showing creativity and the mental acuity to "Catch a Thief" if so desired......

    Peace and Blessings
     
  5. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey this is tite

    one
    /antar
     
  6. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Queen,MzBlkAngel,Rasheed,and Antar.
    Thank you guys so much for the feedback.
    I am glad you enjoyed the peice.
    :star:
     
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    I guess those are the kind of thieves dreams are made of, liked this flow.
     
  8. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My type of flow!!!!! I'm diggin this!
     
  9. angelicsage

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    hmmmm...
    you captured that air of mystery
    so well...because having your
    heart & love stolen is just that...
    leaving you questioning...
    when? even how?...because you were so
    into that theif...you never felt
    your heart when it left...
    you just know when it's gone...

    Loved it!
     
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