Black Poetry : The_story (part 1 of the identity series)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Apr 19, 2004.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the_story-mystery

    she would sit awakening
    the dawn at 5 in the morning
    wondering when our people would be free...
    she would paint the sky's blu with her words
    and she would make the clouds dance and began
    to dance and scream and fight for her passion ...
    peotry...

    laying in a drunken stuper
    on her self-created hill tops
    jagged rocks cut into her flesh
    and she bled expression..


    freedom fought for domination...
    peotry fought to be understood...
    and she fought to be one with the Elder Gods
    that created spoken word...

    her peotry held a deeper meaning
    that would seep into the mind of others
    and make them ponder why she wrote like that...

    her existence held mystery...

    copywrite 2004, all rights reserved
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nicely posed
    tight drop
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet release the mystery of her beings
    tyte write
     
  4. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love yall
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    -story
     
  5. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful

    Sister story,
    This flow was indeed great!
     
  6. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks sistah, i try to do my best...

    P.S Check for part .2 intitled Mz.Behavin, and i meight do one called chicken fajita just for u gal, :kiss:
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    -story
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl


    lololol, I say go for it..lolol..ok, Imma have to check you out
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flowing with knowledge that pours onto the page for others to soak in. I'm feelin this.
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love,
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    -story
     
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    Sister...this is you...

    Beautiful Work!
     
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