Black Poetry : The Wrong Woman

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  1. blacklove

    blacklove Active Member MEMBER

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    I feel you moving , slipping away
    I try to call, but i cant find the words to say
    My lips move, but they dont make a sound
    I hear your voice, but you're nowhere around
    I close my eyes, but cant find my sleep
    My wounds will not heal, you cut me to deep
    My mind is strong, but my spirit is weak
    I gotta find a way to get back on my feet

    Well you can be so cruel
    I just dont understand
    Do the tears i cry make you feel like a woman
    I told you once
    Let me tell you again
    You cant do right, cause you're the wrong woman

    Each time i cry, it's a sign of my pain
    Every tear that falls carries your name
    There's nothing i can say or can do
    Because i was a fool to even fall for you.
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow,blk!

    This was too deep!,I understand exactly what you're saying! Straight to the point.Feelin your poetry. And be happy with yourself and your decision.Lovely scribe.Thanks for sharing it with us.
    Desert STorm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    BLACKLOVE I FEEL YA FLOW
    SHE BE DA WRONG WOMAN
    DATS FO SHO....HOLD YA HEAD
    HIGH AND FLY THE SKIES OF LOVE
    TAKE YA TYME U WILL FINE THE
    QUEEN TO BE JUST RIGHT 4 THEE
    I'VE BEEN THIS ROUGHT AND BACK
    KEEP MOVIN'
     
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    BlackLove ...

    you will look up
    one day soon
    expecting to see the moon
    as it travels with the night
    but your eyes will squint
    at the bright sunlight
    dark will turn to day
    and you'll be loving again
    i pray

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    But isn't it better...

    to know love than to
    have not known love at all?

    Definitely a nice scribe!!
     
  6. blacklove

    blacklove Active Member MEMBER

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    thank you

    thank you all for reading and replying to my poem
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so hott
    I mean where is this poet????
    Holla this is tttttttttttttiiiiiight
     
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    felt the pain and disqust when you wrote this. sometimes the thing we craved the most isnt the rite thing, and have us crying for our mistakes at the end. flow on poet.:x:
     
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