Black Poetry : The Wrong Props

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, May 3, 2002.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    First,
    I'd like to thank my Lord and Savior Jesus Christ
    He knows what's in my heart
    When I call women *******, Ho's and Skanks
    It's all good
    As long as I give thanks

    Yes Lord
    Thank you Lord
    He guided me through the taking of my brothers work
    Thank you Lord for making it my own
    I've sold a million CD's

    Yes, thank you Lord
    I've truly been blessed
    Just look at these 16 year old honey's
    Getting in the Limo
    Soon they'll be undressed
    (applause, applause, applause)
    Thank God...He's the one made it all happen

    Thank you Lord
    I couldn't have done it without you
    Oh is my time almost up

    See ya'll at the after party
    Plenty of weed
    Plenty of blow
    Once again
    I want to thank the Lord
    For all my blessings
    Now I got to go
    Thank you
    Thank you
    Thank you

    BE
     
  2. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoo!!! r. kelly are ya listening!...so sad but true, and you laid it out here my brotha...

    One,
    Derrick Jay
     
  3. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the truth hurts !

    but it also makes for a good read !


    go head Heartbeat : Reprsent !
     
  4. Lahana Mysteria

    Lahana Mysteria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Makes you go hmmmm....
    Truth....
     
  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tell it Tell it!!!!!!!

    Tell it, tell it...as we use to say " GO DOWNTOWN AND SELL IT"!
    I still don't know what that means but you brought it out there
    so smooth and melodic...without being guilty of defamation:flame: But, every once in a while you just got to
    bust em out.....and TELL IT TELL IT!
    AND THEY CAN GO DOWNTOWN AND SELL IT!
    BLESSING ON YA HOUSE!
     
  6. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man you have saved me from writing on this.

    i'm glad you pulled their cards and only if they all read it.

    peace
    jh.
     
  7. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is Tyte Heartbeat!!

    With a message encrypted deep within the words...Folks need to here this...Deep my brutha! Deep!
     
  8. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    don't know how I missed this oz. of uncut truth....

    say it, Poet!

    alyce
     
  9. Aminata

    Aminata Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heartbeat

    you did your thang here!!! They need to recognize!!!!!

    Tight piece!!!
     
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