Black Haiku : The Wrong Head

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  1. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lead by the wrong head.
    Though she dogs him, he stays cuz
    She loves him so good.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    in need of

    a new thinking cap
    coz dis one be of a lost
    she stay within him..........:eek:
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MsJ.


    i love-did this!! ...problee 'cause in some cases...
    it ain't nuthin' but da truth!! :lol: so... you've inspired
    me!... here goes...

    good love has been known...
    ...to weaken the minds of men
    thank God i'm a Queen!
    :D

    (& guys befo ya'll start... i know my lil haiku can
    go both ways!! :x: )

    thanks MsJ!!

    :heart:
    SunShyne~
     
  4. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You Poets

    Rich: This type of fellow needs to change his thinking cap fast. Sometimes guys think they are gettin' ova. But should they run into this type of woman, she will put a hurting on their heart fast.
    She is a set trap. She's pretty, fine and deadly.

    GA: That's a cool haiku, girlfriend. I dare you to write some mo like dis heah. Thanks for the read sis.
     
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    Joyce

    I hate to sound cliche'ish....but this is fantastic! Gurl you are all ova these haikus, and I ain't mad atcha'!! :D


    Lovin' it!!

    N2
     
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    welllllll

    welllllllllll
    welllllllllll

    :)

    a
     
  7. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Ms. N and Ms. A I bow before the both of you.
     
  8. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Ms. N and Ms. A I bow before the both of you.
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    moving to our new home per your request (haiku bound) :)
     
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