Black Poetry : THE WORST KIND OF PAIN

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  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    As we both needed the same
    How did we become so distant
    You were my sister .. you forgot that in an instant?

    Welcomed you in my home
    Something no one else would do
    You were my sister .. how could you?

    It was never about him
    There are so many like he
    You were my sister.. what happened to you and me?

    I wiped your tears when you cried
    Even when I felt no compassion
    You were my sister.. was that not everlasting?

    I forgive you
    Although I can't say the words

    I forgive you
    But there must remain a silence between grlz

    Matter of fact.. I forgive you both
    But I still feel the worst kind of pain..

    Most of all....

    I forgive me

    For I am the only one I can change.
     
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    AMEN...

    Love is the worst kind of pain

    I love the way in which you light up a room ~
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    ^^ you are too kind... thank you 1Poet...
     
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    Miss Lady! Miss Lady! LOL!!!! We must meet up 'cause we have so many similar experiences its not even funny! I know exactly what you talking about in this piece...feeling this flow BIG TIME!!!!!
     
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    ^^^^^

    Miss Lady!!!!!!!!!
    You are really keeping it soul alive
    I loved that
    We are so important through our own lives!!!Many forget...
    and there are many times when our loves is taken for granted Why?
    I do not know
    But as you said Sis....
    Only we can change ourselves
    ~Bless~
    :10200:
     
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    um

    feeling this vision

    self improvement of a situation

    really feeling this

    the loss of a friend over something that wasn't even actual
     
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    Yes, I can see why that would be a gut wrenching pain. I felt the ache in this.
     
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    Miss Lady, Miss Lady, Miss Lady

    This piece really allows us to see who you are!!!!

    luv dis:hearts4:
     
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    Hey Miss Lady
    This drop is so on point.
    We are all loving how your flows
    are hitting the marks in our mind and that
    is good. Keep bringing it.

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    this brings me back.
    somehow we will get through.
    this too shall pass, Miss Lady,
    this too...
    Thanks
    Desert Storm
     
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