Black Poetry : The Worlds Confused Spiral

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  1. Poetic Legend

    Poetic Legend Member MEMBER

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    She's lost in the cold
    Were in a world is so bold
    Where virginity is so old and...
    Money is made on poles so....
    Why are children being sold there....
    Walking down this lonely road why?
    When mothers could just hold

    Not another victim of the streets being stole
    We need....
    Fathers sticking by her side playing there role and....
    Some teenagers just don't know so...
    That's why there heads hang so low

    Teary eyed because there stories aren't told yet...
    It grows and infects like molds yet...
    It stares in the face like moles
    Yes kind of scary make you hide in holes
    Yep terrified you just might fold and...
    I know it's hard to let go
    I know I know

    Like a raging machine
    What does it really mean
    It portrays the simplest of things
    As beautiful as a bird sings
    Yet as dark as a hype fens
    The world isn't always as it seems
    If your still reading this you see what I'm seeing

    Stressed out hookers on corners
    Guns on foreigners
    I'm black and sometimes I feel like a foreigner
    No casket just coroners
    No grave just mourners
    The devil may cry, but I'm not knowing her
    We kill animals and wear stolen fur
    Life is still a blur
    On my blog it's still a blurb
    Yet no need to seek revenge like nerds

    See this is what I want you to see
    The worlds confused spiral
    Stranger than wrestlers with titles
    I'm not the next American idol
    I'm your next poetic rival
    The world might crush your larynx have you leaking saliva
    Yet you might be confused cause I wrote this while I was high so......
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow....welcome brother to the poetic playground of Destee.com
    welcome to the house of peace and respect this was well done and felt
    as i look to read more of you soon and share poetic love and harmony
    again welcome within the family !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You speak of things that exist, as much as we don't want to see these images they are real. Speak on it poet. Welcome to Destee.com. Looking forward to reading more from you.
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    Wow. Welcome Poet. :)
    Compelling piece. Sad and yet there was much truth to it :)
    Definitely interested to see more :)
     
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    thank you for the love poets I appreciate that
     
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    Clyde C Coger Jr going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    In the Spirit of Sankofa!

    Poetic Legend,

    Good write! Help bring our people into the refuge(Destee.com) will ya!

     
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