Black Poetry : The World Wide Web... of Deception

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  1. Yemoja'sGoddess

    Yemoja'sGoddess Banned

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    Removed by choice, thank u for your interest and comments
     
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    Its not really fitting to my mood right now, but I thoroughly enjoyed it!
    Especially

    very powerful
     
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    This poem's structure, the rhymes, the pace, the word choice is awesome. I have seen people actually meet online, and end up getting married, but both have to want that reality. After a while, we can sense when someone is shady, and if we turn a blind eye to it, that association is fulfilling some sort of need, unmet in reality. Eventually, we embrace what's real, then the web of lies no longer serves its purpose. This scribe was suberb, poetess.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    um

    this was so on point Yemoja

    man you are so deep so pure girl

    yea yea

    i'm looking at rings at Tiffany's again lol

    um i really really really liked this post

    now if somebody can change their way

    but like we discussed before YG, the banking system has a way of turning you

    into a phony, stuff you wouldn't even think that it could

    peace

    and i lovedided this piece

    lol
     
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    that about sums it (www...) right Nice!!!

    Blacksolutely Power~filled piece
    Ase
     
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    I hear what ya saying, but ...that's not just the cyber world, it's our world in general.
    "The whole world is a stage, and everybody's playing a part"
    We can hide behind make-up ...but evenually, that will ware off.
    Awesome piece Goddess, Warrior Queen
     
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    truetothecause Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    but ...that's not just the cyber world, it's our world in general.

    Now ain't that some s&%*
    I see and feel it too.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what's behind da screen is also right behind us all in reality
    da www. lies and the realism. foolishly remotely
    tyte write
     
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    With Sincere Thanks

    I Thank U my BEautiful Destee fam for showin' mass luv:love: on this piece. I know I haven't posted in a while, however, all the luv makes me feel right back in place. Watch for more pieces from YG... Be Blessed!:qqb003:
     
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    Definately a web I wouldn't want get caught up in. Too many black widows and daddy-long-lies for my tastes. Eventually those predator's true intentions unfurl. Very chilling piece, Yemoja:spinstar:

    :geek:

    :picture:
     
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