Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Yemoja'sGoddess, Jun 20, 2007.
Removed by choice, thank u for your interest and comments
Its not really fitting to my mood right now, but I thoroughly enjoyed it!
This poem's structure, the rhymes, the pace, the word choice is awesome. I have seen people actually meet online, and end up getting married, but both have to want that reality. After a while, we can sense when someone is shady, and if we turn a blind eye to it, that association is fulfilling some sort of need, unmet in reality. Eventually, we embrace what's real, then the web of lies no longer serves its purpose. This scribe was suberb, poetess.
this was so on point Yemoja
man you are so deep so pure girl
i'm looking at rings at Tiffany's again lol
um i really really really liked this post
now if somebody can change their way
but like we discussed before YG, the banking system has a way of turning you
into a phony, stuff you wouldn't even think that it could
and i lovedided this piece
that about sums it (www...) right Nice!!!
Blacksolutely Power~filled piece
I hear what ya saying, but ...that's not just the cyber world, it's our world in general.
"The whole world is a stage, and everybody's playing a part"
We can hide behind make-up ...but evenually, that will ware off.
Awesome piece Goddess, Warrior Queen
but ...that's not just the cyber world, it's our world in general.
Now ain't that some s&%*
I see and feel it too.
what's behind da screen is also right behind us all in reality
da www. lies and the realism. foolishly remotely
With Sincere Thanks
I Thank U my BEautiful Destee fam for showin' mass luv on this piece. I know I haven't posted in a while, however, all the luv makes me feel right back in place. Watch for more pieces from YG... Be Blessed!
Definately a web I wouldn't want get caught up in. Too many black widows and daddy-long-lies for my tastes. Eventually those predator's true intentions unfurl. Very chilling piece, Yemoja
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