Black Poetry : The world stop turning

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seems like the world stop turning

    The miles got my
    Emotions twisting….
    Tangled in a hazy way
    Lost in you…
    Don’t
    Oh, I don’t want to be found
    Not this time…
    Craving in ways I never have
    Wanting the comforted of my baby
    Ignite my love and sail me across the orbs
    Embrace the essence of us

    See the world stop turning

    It’s just
    You and I…


    Through the orbs
    It’s all about your love
    Upon the moonlight
    It’s all about your love
    In the midnight hour,
    It’s all about your love
    Within the sands of time
    It’s
    …It’s
    All about your love

    My heart aches
    For the sweet love you give
    And the mental tease, oh baby
    I….
    …..I just
    Can’t stand being away from you
    No longer….

    Seems like the world stop turning

    My love is coming down
    As we take part in this dance
    Of sweet romance
    Conversation stimulation
    Insatiable Erotic-us-tion

    My heart calling you
    Your spirit calling me
    As my tears run
    Emotions flow on high

    Feed me mentally
    It’s all about your love
    Soothe my soul
    It’s all about your love
    Hold my heart
    Consume me
    NO...
    ....No one have
    Loved me the way you do
    ...You do

    Seems like the world stop turning

    Missing you with all my heart
    Seems like the devil
    Is invading our lives
    All the fighting and fussing
    I don't know what to do

    See....
    The world stop turning


    (c) 2005
    ANTHOLOGY of One Woman’s Heart
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like sand from the hour glass...so are the days of our lives, time is short...don't waste it. If he's what makes you happy, go for it. You have the kind of love...most would die for, and that's some kind of wonderful.
    This piece warmed my heart entirely. Awesome piece.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Couldn't have said it any better, Queen. Much love.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    this was outstanding and so ummmmm beautifully written
    i just cascade deep in it go get ya love sweetie don't hold back
    like queentswana said .....i'm speechless but in joy tyte flow
    sista
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    trying to critic hmmm dont we have a forum for that...this is GET YA FLOW ON
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ok back to the real love....

    QT..thank you for the love and the insight of the meaning of this peice..happy you enjoyed it

    1Poet...thank you for the love my brother

    $$RICH$$...happy you likes not holding back love is hard to find in this world once you have it hold on yes indees thanks for the love


    Peace
    Angel
     
  8. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    The world didn't stop turning. Sounds to me like you sped up too fast. Slow down...and you'll see. :wink: :D

    This is a very nice poem. I can feel the emotion in it.

    :thanks: for sharing your talent with us...the Fam.

    :toast:
     
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    My love is coming down
    As we take part in this dance
    Of sweet romance
    Conversation stimulation
    Insatiable Erotic-us-tion

    i liked those lines alot...nice job miss black.......
     
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    This was nice............
    Wonderful Scribe
    always a pleasure to read your work
     
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