Black Poetry : The woman/man of your dreams

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LeRoy, Dec 29, 2003.

  1. LeRoy

    LeRoy Active Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful

    Who is the woman in my dreams?
    Her name must be Perfection because she has no flaws.
    Heaven calls to her because she is an angel on Earth.
    Her worth is more than all of mankind’s possessions.
    She emits the sent of a collection of roses and her protection is in her essence.
    Her presence paralyzes every muscle in my body except for my heart.
    As I start to feel the thud of my chest become louder and louder,
    I receive a sudden rush of adrenaline.
    To believe that the being in front of me was not Perfection,
    I would have to deceive my soul.
    Apart, we are two halves of a single whole.
    Lust, not love can take its toll on any man, but
    I trust that with us there must be something even deeper.
    In Eden, God took a rib from man and he made it into woman.
    Can there ever be a plan that will perform with such precision as
    Gods decision to express the quintessence of love?
    On my own there is only one way to address Perfection.
    Biblically you are bone of my bones and flesh of my flesh,
    But to convey how I feel about you would take countless days.
    Nonetheless, there is one thing that I know for sure.
    I know that on any occasion you will never need my persuasion
    For me to be completely truthful.
    In every way possible you will always be
    Beautiful




     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    nice scribe man...
    i can dig it...
    i believe no one is perfect
    but i do believe that there are
    people that are perfect
    for each other...
    one love
    khasm
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LeRoy you're 17? Wow...Such a beautiful, meaningful scribe..keep on writing.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now this was posed so well
    i likes this one...flow on my young brother....Angel
     
  5. Bluewater

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    my goodness this is beautiful as well as deep..:)
    wonderful flow
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
  6. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do you know what you just wrote ?



    You wrote a beautifull masterpiece Young Poet .....



    amazing.....this just took my breath tonight...



    welcome Leroy ..



    Love liberty
     
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    WELCOME YOUNG SCRIBE!

    This is a beautiful piece filled with much wisdom.
    What a wonderful debut into this place we call the
    PLAYGROUND...Play and learn along the way!
    You are wonderfully gifted, keep on keeping on!

    Blessings On Ya house! :grouphug:
     
  8. phat_baby68

    phat_baby68 New Member MEMBER

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    jus saying sumthin

    you are right if you are in love with a person there's nothin but perfection to that person because theres nothing wrong wit them because it's in your eyes that's the person you want to spend the rest of your life with but there's always perefection n a relationship that make that person perfect and that's love and that's the only thing that make a person perfect and beautiful​
    :fairy:
     
  9. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your flow is just so....soo....damm......it was heaven on earth is all i can say
     
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